Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Light #4323

You don’t know me but I have saved your life almost every day,
You don’t know me but I see you all the time,
I have seen you sing, I have seen you with your friends,
My name is Light #4323.  I sit on the corner of 4800 W. and SR 92.
All my life I Have faced north, my story is simple. I sit and tell you when to go and stop.
I have watched people die.  People who have not lessened to my simple advice.
I have seen live change. I have seen men in cars racing to get there pregnant wife’s to the hospital.
I have seen ambulances softly rocking the dyeing to sleep.  I know you so well but you have never given me a second thought.
Next time I stop you, instead of changing the radio station or texting a friend, think of the serves I provide,
And all the things that keep you safe every day.

Finail Analisis

Movie: The Greatest gift.

OW: Red Stevens Dies rich, Nef. Josh Stevens is rich kid who lives of trust funds.
Call:  Red leaves a video Will with Mr. Hamilton (reds layer) Josh can get all of Reds money if he completes 6 tasks.
Refusal: Josh goes of with out the first job back to his home.
Mentor: is Mr. Hamilton, and a little girl he meats at a park.
Threshold: One of the gifts is when Josh has all of his possession's repossessed.
Test, Allies, Enemies: Josh goes to South America for one of the jobs,  He is captured by a drug lord and held hostage. He escapes when the drug lords are drunk.
The approach: is when Josh finely get all of the jobs done and a trust fund for $100,000,000.
Ordeals: what Josh will do with the $100,000,000.
Reword: is when Josh bilds a new wing on the hospital. When Josh gives the $100,000,000 he gits the last and gratest gift, 300,000,000,000.
The rode back: he marys the hot chick.
The return with the elixir: 300,000,000,000!!

Thursday, December 9, 2010

50 words

This is a story about a boy who was so deprived.  He neaver had anything so he ran away.  He sold penuts at the surckis when he was kidanaped.  The kidnapers took the boy to a manchan where the kidnapers all suffered fatal hart ataks.  So the boy live in the house forever.

blurbs

Im Still a guy,
A song that will tell the lissiner that brad pasily is 100% man.  He likes to hunt, fish and spend time with his wife.  but no mater what he is a guy.

Monday, November 29, 2010

Sixers

give me a paper and pen.
Last name ever, first name greatest.
burn a twin die alone.
girl I think I love you
Oh Damn that was a cop.
Mom what did i just eat.
How fast can this car go.
So are you doing anything tonight.
Dude i thought you where dead.

Song Lyrics

Song- American solders
The song American solders is about American solders.
The setting is anywhere in the world.
it is a tribute to all American solders.

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

beat-2

1-     If you don’t stop following me, I will shoot you.
2-     No, I need to help you…
1-     I will shoot you. (a sliding metallic sound comes from the girls bag.)
2-     Some one will ether hurt you or someone you love.
1-      How can I trust you after I watched you hurt me?
2-       I screwed my life when I hurt you, I just want to help you.
1-     I don’t believe you, if you don’t stop flowing me I will shoot you. ( girl pulls a large black gun, she holds it like she knows how to use it.)
1-I was a cop for 13 years you know, you were suppose to watch my back but you were chasing some sluts skirt. And I got shot for it.  Now turn around.
2- No I wont make the same mistake 2 times.  I will not  leave your side, I will keep you safe.
1- you leave me no chose.( girl puts a round in mans leg. Man falls and calls 911)
1- I’m sorry but I hate you.( girl walks around corner and man hears girl scream.)